Thursday, April 19, 2012

Early

Warmth bleeds from the skin
of the day.  The storm has come
home early from work.

14 comments:

Sylvia K said...

Perfect! There was a time when I could relate!!

Mary said...

Good one! Here, any storms are of my own making...LOL.

Fireblossom said...

Leave it to you to rock a haiku.

kaykuala said...

This is an interesting side info, MZ! Yes,the pains of household chores are not adequately addressed by couples who bother only with their own thing. Did I get it right? Great thought!

Hank

Enigmatic Soul said...

Wow. Brilliant! "The storm has come
home early from work." - especially because of all the possible interpretations. Keep it up!

Brian Miller said...

hopefully it is a cooling stand in the rain and not a flood...

Carol Steel 5050 said...

Wow, this is visceral and raw. Love it.

PattiKen said...

I'd be happy if the storm would slay the humidity, which seems bent on sucking up all the air for itself. Gasp.

Kerry O'Connor said...

Oh, excellent! I like the way the punctuation fractures the second line.

Shawna said...

The skin of the day. I like that. I love your haiku style. :)

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hedgewitch said...

I just wish it would take a day off.

Fred Rutherford said...

Pretty neat Haiku MZ. Warmth bleeds from the skin, love that opening.

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Good haiku Mama Zen :)

Joe Lunievicz said...

Beautiful haiku - like a painting in 17 strokes of the brush.