Thursday, April 26, 2012

The Birds Sing

The birds sing of God,
each melody a prayer.
Even I listen.

For Imperfect Prose
and the April Heights Haiku Challenge

18 comments:

Sylvia K said...

Beautiful! Leave it to the birds!!

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Perfect. Just perfect.

Brian Miller said...

smiles...love to listen to the birds...a bit more pure that way...smiles.

manicddaily said...

Terrific. (Even crows.) K.

The Poetic Homemaker said...

Nice Haiku, but I couldn't help but crack a little smile at the last line. :)

Fireblossom said...

I'm assuming these were Cardinals. (Sorry, I'm Catholic!)

Mary said...

Birds have their ways!

Lolamouse said...

Birdsong is one of the few prayers I will listen to!

PattiKen said...

Lovely, MZ.

turtlememoir said...

Beautiful!

Helen said...

Lovely haiku, I am still laughing at Shay's comment (I'm Catholic too - though a bit lapsed.)

Fred Rutherford said...

Very nice, this may be my favorite of your Haiku.

Claudia said...

love listening to the birds...

Tara Pohlkotte said...

you know, this is how all prayer should sound...beautiful.

emily wierenga said...

oh wow.

just... wow.

you said it all, everything i've been thinking every morning as i step out and listen to the birds sing... you said what i've been feeling, right here. so perfect. thank you friend.

happygirl said...

This is a lovely haiku. perfect

beccagivens said...

Divine!! :)

Ostriches Look Funny said...

This was prefect. Birdlike, songlike, prayerlike.