Wonderful as always and a great start for my weekend -- hope you have a great one, too!
I adore this.
Me, too... I love this, MZ.
Names have power--that's why there are always lots of them in spells--like the one this poem casts.
So succinct and so perfect, Mama Zen.
really nice lines here MZ. The opening stanza is particularly very cool. Thanks
Very nice indeed! are the swallowedsigns and symbols sharp, flat,sweet or tangy ? :)
great mystical feel to this...the swallowing of sounds to save...def like that thought...
I like the first stanza..very eye catching...
aaahhhh simply beautiful lines...
I love how well you've captured the power of a name in just a few words.
The wind IS a thief. :)~Shawnarosemarymint.wordpress.com
Sorry I get too click-happy; I'm just impatient when my comments don't load fast enough.~Shawna
"lest the wind steal you away."there's a softness and quietness to this poem that ends on the perfect note.LOVE it!♥
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