Less than 40 words. You are awfully damn good at this brevity thing you do, woman. You tell a story and then some, here.
You are indeed damn good at this! Never fails to amaze me and I do enjoy your saying so many of the things that I would love to say! And here I've spent most of my life learning how NOT to say them! sylvia
I like this MZ ~ Short and spirited ~
oh snap....the second verse says much in little...making love to keep from discussin...ugh
I agree with Fireblossom. With you, less is so much more...
As always, it's as near as damned perfect as makes no difference.
Yeesh! I wish I knew how (HOW?) you do this.
Gorgeous, fun, light on its feet - I love it.
love the tone/voice here, love those cussin' fussin's discussin' and pickin's. cool write thanks
That first stanza is killer and brutal fact. I like this one a lot. Short and punchy.
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