Friday, March 23, 2012

The Clean Version

There once was a mama named Zen
adept with the keyboard and pen.
She blogs tawdry tales
and her daily travails
so you'll come back and see her again!

A limerick I reworked a bit  for Form for All at dVerse.


26 comments:

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

Well done! Excellent meter.

Blue Flute said...

Well written, I like, Mama Zen
For this it seems you have a yen
You said it was clean
So now I want seen
The dirty one hiding about the bend

ayala said...

Well done :)

Semaphore said...

Mama Zen, you've a flair for the poetry,
Though I'd hesitate calling them tawdry.
You make innocents blink
With your paper and ink,
Or should I have said your keyboardry.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Sure will, babe!

And you've got this form down. :)

chromapoesy.com said...

Works like a charm; I always want to visit again!

Brian Miller said...

dont you know it
wouldnt want to miss a moment

Sylvia K said...

And you do and we do, and I, too, don't want to miss a moment!!

Grace said...

Nice limerick...and limerick comments too. See you soon ~

Charles Miller said...

Mama you're great with wit and pen. A limerick barely fits your charm.

Fireblossom said...

Always!

Kerry O'Connor said...

Definitely!

brendanblue said...

That's my Mama! You could put this in a sidebar by way of nailing the enterprise. - Brendan

Lydia said...

Ha! .... And we do. And I did!

happygirl said...

This was unexpected... ;P I was expecting her to be from Nantucket.

Fred Rutherford said...

Nice Limerick. The title works so well with the piece itself, that and the self-reference- really like how the piece all works together. Thanks

hedgewitch said...

Wouldn't dream of missing a tawdry word.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Cleanly done!

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Cleanly done!

Laurie Kolp said...

Fun, MZ... and we always come back b/c we love you!!

Mary said...

Ah yes, I will definitely always return!!

Daydreamertoo said...

Haha... and YES..we do all come back to see you again and again :)

Cheryl said...

That's completely snortworthy! Great job coming up with a fun limerick that's clean.

NixBlog said...

Ha! Love it! :-)

Claudia said...

and glad you do..and happily come back over and over again..smiles

Buttons said...

Mama Zen is very cool indeed. B