Well done! Excellent meter.
Well written, I like, Mama ZenFor this it seems you have a yenYou said it was cleanSo now I want seenThe dirty one hiding about the bend
Well done :)
Mama Zen, you've a flair for the poetry,Though I'd hesitate calling them tawdry.You make innocents blinkWith your paper and ink,Or should I have said your keyboardry.
Sure will, babe!And you've got this form down. :)
Works like a charm; I always want to visit again!
dont you know itwouldnt want to miss a moment
And you do and we do, and I, too, don't want to miss a moment!!
Nice limerick...and limerick comments too. See you soon ~
Mama you're great with wit and pen. A limerick barely fits your charm.
Always!
Definitely!
That's my Mama! You could put this in a sidebar by way of nailing the enterprise. - Brendan
Ha! .... And we do. And I did!
This was unexpected... ;P I was expecting her to be from Nantucket.
Nice Limerick. The title works so well with the piece itself, that and the self-reference- really like how the piece all works together. Thanks
Wouldn't dream of missing a tawdry word.
Cleanly done!
Fun, MZ... and we always come back b/c we love you!!
Ah yes, I will definitely always return!!
Haha... and YES..we do all come back to see you again and again :)
That's completely snortworthy! Great job coming up with a fun limerick that's clean.
Ha! Love it! :-)
and glad you do..and happily come back over and over again..smiles
Mama Zen is very cool indeed. B
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Well done! Excellent meter.
Well written, I like, Mama Zen
For this it seems you have a yen
You said it was clean
So now I want seen
The dirty one hiding about the bend
Well done :)
Mama Zen, you've a flair for the poetry,
Though I'd hesitate calling them tawdry.
You make innocents blink
With your paper and ink,
Or should I have said your keyboardry.
Sure will, babe!
And you've got this form down. :)
Works like a charm; I always want to visit again!
dont you know it
wouldnt want to miss a moment
And you do and we do, and I, too, don't want to miss a moment!!
Nice limerick...and limerick comments too. See you soon ~
Mama you're great with wit and pen. A limerick barely fits your charm.
Always!
Definitely!
That's my Mama! You could put this in a sidebar by way of nailing the enterprise. - Brendan
Ha! .... And we do. And I did!
This was unexpected... ;P I was expecting her to be from Nantucket.
Nice Limerick. The title works so well with the piece itself, that and the self-reference- really like how the piece all works together. Thanks
Wouldn't dream of missing a tawdry word.
Cleanly done!
Cleanly done!
Fun, MZ... and we always come back b/c we love you!!
Ah yes, I will definitely always return!!
Haha... and YES..we do all come back to see you again and again :)
That's completely snortworthy! Great job coming up with a fun limerick that's clean.
Ha! Love it! :-)
and glad you do..and happily come back over and over again..smiles
Mama Zen is very cool indeed. B
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