Amen Mama, amen!
Profound and very true.
Nice job, you do a great job with the Haiku format, better than almost anyone I've read. Love the consonance on full display here, love those W's. Thanks
oh snap...def...that last line is the knot in the noose...
Waiting for nothing. So sad.
Yes, it is sad that there is no hope.
You ain't foolin--nothing worse than the wait, except sometimes what happens when it's over.
ugh...true that...very fine haiku mz
"the weight of waiting" is a fine phraseWaiting for the Women
That last line is the killer line ~
Amen, amen to that, MZ!! Have a great weekend!Sylvia
Tragic, but true.
I agree with you, Mama Zen!
a very heavy "weight" indeed!
"The weight of waiting" I liked this line.Sad but nicely crafted haiku.
oh! i LOVE this, MZ! my favorite of all the responses to the prompt that i've read!♥
Superb one!!! My favourite! :)
Yes, it zaps your strength..Well Done!
You got that right!
True, that. Also love the alliteration, unforced and perfect. Thank you.
'weight of waiting' ~ Loved it so much Zen!
The weight of waitingwears on a fellow when there'snothing worth the wait.
oooh ... "Nothing worth the wait"Good line!
So true... and beautifully put! I'm a follower :)
Heartbreaking & True....
Phew, I guess there's nothing worse than waiting!
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