Aww -- sweet!! True love and affection evident ... throws a wrench into the organized side of us!!
Some things refuse to be alphabetized. And gesundheit on the Pikachoo.
Really nice. Love the pokemon reference there, very cute. Pikachu was always my favorite, especially when it got all mad, jumped in the sky, yelled pika, pikachu and blasted it's opponent. Really nice thoughts here. thanks
This is just as sweet as can be, MZ.
oh yes..i know what you mean...
Delightful.
Yeah...there is always that one person who pops up and turns shit upside down..
Nice! :)The first thing that came to my mind when I saw the word Pi-ku was Pikachu! ;)I guess it was the same with you! :D
The Haiku is very sweet.
Oh MZ, this is just beautiful - and so effective, the way you've arranged the two stanzas, the tidiness of the first completely undone in the second.
Sweet!!!!!!!!
Love it! You know how to choose the power words that will count in a micro-poetic form.(I <3 Pikachu!)
I love it ~He..he...pikachu ...
Yep, me, too, I love it! You do know how to choose the words that say it all in very few!Sylvia
Feeling just can't be boxed and neatly labelled.
well done!
A great combinationWell written!
Brilliant :-)
There certainly can be that "one" who can through all the carefully compartmentalized thoughts into a tizzy...
I love this! It's a little pearl of perfection.K
love certainly puts ones thoughts into disarray
pi-kaaaahhh ahh love!
yeah that tends to get my thoughts in a tizzy as well...
Well crafted! I had no idea what was coming until the end. I love surprises!If Cacti Could Think
Sweet, succinct and perfect.
Sweet how you arranged them neatly too,lol.
Awe... I really liked this. It made me wish it was about me. I think I might have to quote your words in a Valentine. LOL.
This is my goal. And my distraction. :)
Incredible turn about! Loved it.
Aww.. That's sweet.. Loved your take..Someone is Special
Oh, very nice! :)
amazing.Hello,How are you?Do you like challenges?Share your talent with us by writing for our theme today, or share a random piece of poetry.Hope to see you soon!Best wishes.Cheers.Happy Creative Writing,xoxox
VERY nice! i know the feeling. {smile}♥
Love that you're doing the 'ku! This reminds me of that Liz Phair song "Why Can't I."
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Aww -- sweet!! True love and affection evident ... throws a wrench into the organized side of us!!
Some things refuse to be alphabetized. And gesundheit on the Pikachoo.
Really nice. Love the pokemon reference there, very cute. Pikachu was always my favorite, especially when it got all mad, jumped in the sky, yelled pika, pikachu and blasted it's opponent. Really nice thoughts here. thanks
This is just as sweet as can be, MZ.
oh yes..i know what you mean...
Delightful.
Yeah...there is always that one person who pops up and turns shit upside down..
Nice! :)
The first thing that came to my mind when I saw the word Pi-ku was Pikachu! ;)
I guess it was the same with you! :D
The Haiku is very sweet.
Oh MZ, this is just beautiful - and so effective, the way you've arranged the two stanzas, the tidiness of the first completely undone in the second.
Sweet!!!!!!!!
Love it! You know how to choose the power words that will count in a micro-poetic form.
(I <3 Pikachu!)
I love it ~
He..he...pikachu ...
Yep, me, too, I love it! You do know how to choose the words that say it all in very few!
Sylvia
Feeling just can't be boxed and neatly labelled.
well done!
A great combination
Well written!
Brilliant :-)
There certainly can be that "one" who can through all the carefully compartmentalized thoughts into a tizzy...
I love this! It's a little pearl of perfection.
K
love certainly puts ones thoughts into disarray
pi-kaaaahhh ahh love!
yeah that tends to get my thoughts in a tizzy as well...
Well crafted! I had no idea what was coming until the end. I love surprises!
If Cacti Could Think
Sweet, succinct and perfect.
Sweet how you arranged them neatly too,lol.
Awe... I really liked this. It made me wish it was about me. I think I might have to quote your words in a Valentine. LOL.
This is my goal. And my distraction. :)
Incredible turn about! Loved it.
Aww.. That's sweet.. Loved your take..
Someone is Special
Oh, very nice! :)
amazing.
Hello,
How are you?
Do you like challenges?
Share your talent with us by writing for our theme today, or share a random piece of poetry.
Hope to see you soon!
Best wishes.
Cheers.
Happy Creative Writing,
xoxox
VERY nice! i know the feeling. {smile}
♥
Love that you're doing the 'ku! This reminds me of that Liz Phair song "Why Can't I."
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