Friday, February 24, 2012

Other Side Of The Break

With every dream walks
waking just the other side
of day's brittle break.

For the Haiku Challenge - Day 24

18 comments:

Sylvia K said...

Beautiful, simple and perfect! Enjoy your weekend!

Sylvia

Fred Rutherford said...

I like that MZ, the other side of day's brittle break. nice job. Thanks

Grace said...

I like this..specially the last line ~

kaykuala said...

Great simple one MZ!

Hank

beccagivens said...

Day's brittle break ... great last line for your Haiku

Brian Miller said...

we could all use a little break eh?

happygirl said...

The break from my dream to waking. I always try to hold on to my dream, but it slips through the cracks of that break. :)

Enigmatic Soul said...

Its like a feeling of hopelessness mixed with a sort of acceptance in an attempt to perhaps, move on. Well penned.

Fireblossom said...

It's good. The fact that I can bear to read it at this point, says so. But I am so so so so SO sick of haiku. Will February never end?

ayala said...

Nice :)

Tara R. said...

The last line is a stunner.

Marion said...

Excellent haiku. Speaks volumes. xo

hedgewitch said...

Yes, even if you keep your eyes closed, it's hard to ignore the alarm.

Someone is Special said...

simple and beautiful Zen.. Loved it.. :-)

ab said...

Love that last line!

myheartslovesongs said...

exquisite, MZ!

Kathe W. said...

I love that last line especially. Lovely haiku

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Very clever use of the prompt words here!