Beautiful, simple and perfect! Enjoy your weekend!Sylvia
I like that MZ, the other side of day's brittle break. nice job. Thanks
I like this..specially the last line ~
Great simple one MZ!Hank
Day's brittle break ... great last line for your Haiku
we could all use a little break eh?
The break from my dream to waking. I always try to hold on to my dream, but it slips through the cracks of that break. :)
Its like a feeling of hopelessness mixed with a sort of acceptance in an attempt to perhaps, move on. Well penned.
It's good. The fact that I can bear to read it at this point, says so. But I am so so so so SO sick of haiku. Will February never end?
The last line is a stunner.
Excellent haiku. Speaks volumes. xo
Yes, even if you keep your eyes closed, it's hard to ignore the alarm.
simple and beautiful Zen.. Loved it.. :-)
Love that last line!
I love that last line especially. Lovely haiku
Very clever use of the prompt words here!
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