That packs a lot of eerie in such a short span!
I lie the images of materials that grow in the depths of the earth over milenium. Like dark underground fruits :)Very imaginative!
oh i just love that you have the german word "rot" in this..makes it even more special...polishing bones and call it art...love it
Gorgeous!Loved it all.You could write a whole series on what dead girls do (and don't do).
Nice, love the way this piece evolves. Dead girls polish bones and call it art- really says a lot to me there. another excellent write MZ, thanks
So I can take the diamonds and run, each and everyone?
So many juicy words packed into this morsel.
Yikes.... dark, deeply. True.
Wow! Well done! Dark and exciting imagery.
Wow.I adore this!
ditto the 'wows'. good stuff
I love this.
dead girls favorearth tones for their homes.dead girlsstayup at night toread your poems!(I love this, MZ!)
great take on the photo...
A lot of that bone polishing going on out there...nicely turned, MZ.
ooo...love the grit in this MZ...so that migrane is paying off eh? smiles...
Love this - you are a master of minimalism - so much richness in so few words - your images transport me to places of wonder
I'm gonna be humming Donna Summer's 'Bad Girls' the rest of the day!
Ewww! And so neat and true. :)
Whoa. Creepy....I love it! =D
Original, imaginative, creative - excellent...
Nice! I like the punch to this poem... the intense way it reads and the darkness that comes with it!
A poem to be read in the heart of Bonaventure Cemetery, Savannah, GA. Just so awesome, for lack of a better word.
As darkangels said, there is a lot in so few words. I'm a fan of that. ;)
yes, I like this
Love the strength of this, the message. Nope, you can't take it with you so get your perspective straight before your time comes to go. Well done.
this was terrific and freaky!!
Dark and creepy -- I likey!
Oh the haiku (senryu) with teeth [and bones]. You can't get any more compact than this, or much more chilling..I might say scintillating.
dont they just - jeez , this is as good as a kick in the nuts (i'm partial too:)V well penned to the point
well fine tuned lines, lovely magpie.
This is brilliant! Done.
Perfect - a little jewel that won't rot.
MZ--I love the space break between the 3rd and 4th lines, along with the incredibly imagery.
That poem was laid to rest on the lower left side of my brain. Deadly.
Dark imagery to suit the picture - taken to another level of shrewdness and originality.
Wow. Just wow.
Im with Lilu this is a just wow piece! much said in brief execution, lovely~ Rose
I loved this. You pack so much in so few words. Really enjoyed.
"Dead girls polish bonesand call it art."one of the BEST! LINES! EVER!this is amazing, MZ!♥
Ok, that difinitely fills my daily quota for morbidity..... This is right out of left field and absolutely perfect.... Entrancing thought, dead girls polishing bones....
I wouldn't waste the gems on the dead girls.
Wow, a cool double whammy. Good one!
Striking, darkly wondrous writing.
Ooh, I love what you did with this picture. So creepy good!
Oh wow!! I love this!!
Dark and delicious...you mean they don't wear plaid? giggle
How delightfully bloodthirsty...
A lovely little jewel!Anna :o]
Mama Zen this is really a nice poem. You painted the picture with so less words that say so much.
Thanks to Claudia, I see your bilingual pun. Very very clever. Wonderful write. Thank you.
I love this! Love the photo too.
Yes.....yes, they do...........:)Perfect. Absolutely perfect!The Collage Pirate
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