Fits the prompt to a "T".
Oh yes ... in it and under it!
Perfect! And now I can go to bed giggling!Sylvia
Ha! Such a perspicacious view of the picture.
Nice write, MZ.
oh dang...nice MZ
Ahh... so very profound... love it, MZ!
Up to your neck in debt, but above water. Stay strong. This image is haunting.
I have a friend who is facing foreclosure and this illustrates her plight perfectly.
Ha I like your take on the Magpie promptalmost belly up I'd say...
great take on the prompt. k.
So perfect and so profound!Anna :o]
Never better than when you go for the throat of a concept and give just the few necessary shakes, MZ.Creeped by the picture, love the poem.
What an amazing piece. Everything in here works so perfect with the surrounding lines and words as well as feeds off the others to lead you toward the overriding sentiment displayed at the end. Great job. Thanks
glad there are two to dig =)
Now isn't this profound: "before we found ourselves" ... Why do we always "find ourselves" after building the sandcastle? One of life's cruel jokes, I suppose.
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