That soon.. Nice contrast of hot and cold...like the storm cloud lips ~ Happy Holidays to you and your family ~
Beautiful! The perfect words as always! Hope your countdown to the big day is going well! Wishing you and your family a most wonderful and beautiful Merry Christmas, MZ!Sylvia
"Storm cloud lips..." Such a gorgeous phrase.
Ah,, but for a brief moment, they are quite lacey and lovely...Happy Holidays!!!!
Lovely images. I like the idea of snowflake kisses.
Fire and ice--lace and lava. Good one MZ--I like the images working overtime here.
i dont know...morning is not a bad time for a ...snowstorm as well...smiles...
Love snowflakes and lace. Great contrast between stanzas, too.
Lovely! Happy holidays to you and yours!
'temporary lace' - how utterly perfect is that?
The first verse particularly: a humdinger!As Dave Allen used to say:"May your God go with you!"
nice..and...hot....smiles - i like
Pretty prose... I'll bet each kiss was different. :)
Love this... :)
wow! I could interpret this poem into another direction….in a tryst.but, I'll stick to the contrast of heat & cold.short, strong little piece. I like the tropes used:snowflake kisses; storm cloud lips…and… the image of ''the heat of your skin'' 'gainst those kisses, is L U S C I O U S ! Love it.nice job.
Makes me almost miss snow...
That second paragraph is, dare I say it, elegant. Babs would be in transports!
Lovely use of imagery, love the snowflake kisses, has a certain ring to it, especially when put into context with the heat of skin. Great job and the snowflake painting is really neat too. Merry Christmas
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