Self-observation?Unexpected and very interesting. :)
Beautiful and true, MZ! Hope you've had a good day1Sylvia
You caught a moment, MZ. Clever title.
At least you recognized yourself in the mirror.
Wonderfully intense! Loved every line.
Good one and I also love the title.
Sharp look at our innate perversity, from which chance does indeed sometime save us.
This is an excellent capture of the moment - unwilling self-awareness and the best defense against it.
Intense and cool !
nice..i like how it was you that caught your eye...nice...
ha i like...sometimes all it needs to save ourselves from ourselves is a bit of hot air...smiles
Really interesting twist at the end there, another enjoyed write. Thanks
Nice and unexpected twist to the prompt.
There is such a sense of something about to happen after the first three lines. I especially like "a window I've no need to walk by" because it places you in the realm of "if only" and "what if" — I love it. So much suspense and drama in so few words!
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