Thursday, November 3, 2011

Outfoxed

It's a wonder wings
didn't sprout from your shoulders
and honey drip from your tongue
from all the things you said
while you were walking me home.
But then the last of the liquor was on our lips,
and daylight couldn't slip between our hips.
Turns out my angel was foxing my hen house all along.

55 Words for my G-Man!

21 comments:

Brian Miller said...

foxing my hen house...what an amazing turn of phrase...ha...nice...

G-Man said...

You must watch out for Coc..er Roosters wearing Angel wings..
Loved your sexy barnyard Tail MZ
You Rock Okie-Dom!!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Boomer-Sooner!!!

5thsister said...

Whoa...(she says while catching her breath and fanning herself!)

Sexy tale indeed!

Morning said...

love the last line, well done.

:)

Margaret said...

This just hums along! 55 words just wasn't ENOUGH here! :)

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

Uh...have we dated the same guy? I love that last line - so true!

hedgewitch said...

A fresh and exuberant look at the divine morphing into the natural world--either that or some kickass hot sh*t. Love the hips line.

KB said...

Love it!

Lydia said...

Brian said it!
What a fantastic 55 this is. :)

anthonynorth said...

Some amazing lines in that. Excellent.

mylittlewordz said...

I suppose this fox only took the one hen??? They tend to swoop on a whole flock at once!
Nicely naughty.
Jamie

Monkey Man said...

Classic close.

Daydreamertoo said...

Naughty fox! ;)

Laurie Kolp said...

Ha- love this.

Nara Malone said...

Fallen angel? Love the play with words.

Heaven said...

Outfoxed?..ha..ha... love it ~

Fireblossom said...

Okay, I officially hate Blogger because a day after you posted it, this STILL isn't showing on my blog roll. Sheesh. Glad i decided to just come barging over here anyway!

If you ask me, someone left the hen house door open. ;-)

izzy said...

I like the daylight bit-all I can say about the angel and the hen house is: Be Kind to all those poor chickens!!!

Fred said...

Really neat piece. Love the hen/fox idea, goes all the way back to myth, and such a good write. Thanks

willofheart said...

hmmm... I love outfoxed...

Eric 'Bubba' Alder said...

Guess counting the chickens is a moot point then. (LOL!)