perhaps we should stick money in its knot holes?smiles...ok, nice....fresh take on fall...
Now I'm thinkin of that cowboy/cowgirl gone wrong song--'All that Glitters is Not Gold.' But this poem is.
My poem and yours are cousins. :)I love this. You are so clever! Excellent closing line.
This was so perfect. Stripteasing trees. :)
Hey, Brian's got a pretty good idea!! Love your words as always, MZ! Have a great week!Sylvia
MZ,Just shows how much Autumn is going to be missed! Great verse!Hank
This is so imaginative. Brassy things!
Such a wonderful description of autumn leaves falling.
Mama Zen, you say so much in so few words. Wow.
Trees just got sexy(ier).
This is amazing. What a visual, what an analogy! And since I live in Vegas, I feel like this spoke to me even more!
Love the analogy in that.
Hi M.Z. ~~ You should have seen the dirty looks I got when I shook a small aspen tree with my cane and sent it's yellow leaves (disrobing it?) sailing into the breeze.We were in Colorado at the end of September...Thank you for peeking on my micro-fiction story. I also have a poem blog but I'm not as prolific as you are. Nor do I have nearly as many readers...
Perfect - Brendan
very beautiful read.love your simple way to send your message.
Awesome description of Fall. Love it, Great way of putting it, there's gold all around me then:) Thanks
Love your take on the prompt..trees do a windy striptease....leaves fall like glitter from a showgirl's shoulders..how creative!
Wow! Sexy autumn. Never saw it that way before. Thanks for the original image. Trees as the Folies Bergere!
oh i love the striptease and the glitterfrom a showgirl's shoulders..
This is one of those times that I say to myself, "Darn, I wish I'd thought of that metaphor." Nice, tight, poem.
awesome imagery! :)
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