Monday, November 28, 2011

The Cloth


Having spent a good portion
of the previous night dreaming
of riding the dark wave of your hips,
our breath mingling,
our voices joining in a rising crescendo -
"oh God, oh GOD, OH GOD"
until we splintered 
like the couch beneath us,

I could not help but blush
when you placed the wafer
on my tongue.

29 comments:

Fireblossom said...

Girl! You wicked thing. I did NOT see that coming! Hot stuff, mercy.

Someone said that southern women like their lovers religious and a little mad. Maybe it's true?

Sheila Moore said...

ahahahaha - you are so bad!

Brian Miller said...

communion before communion...so how many hail marys was that?

Sylvia K said...

Ah, you wicked lady you!!! That's a whole stack of hail marys without a doubt!! What a great laugh to wind down my day and just the one I needed!

Sylvia

Susie Clevenger said...

My my...I didn't expect that ending. I had to smile...great job!

chiccoreal said...

Dear MamaZen: Ohhh...a priest! :)

anthonynorth said...

Transubstantiation has never been so cool.

Doctor FTSE said...

What can one say but "Tut, Tut, Wonderful!"

rel said...

Forgive me father for I have sinned.
Oh well ....
rel

kaykuala said...

MZ,
Oh well,life's great,a little naughty but great! A brave verse!

Hank

Daydreamertoo said...

God loves sinners. Bad girl! ;)
Great write.

Dave King said...

Ha, I guess that caught us all out. Superb!

Eric 'Bubba' Alder said...

You're so good when you're so bad.

Cheryl said...

What Brian said! Terrific write.

Jinksy said...

Yay! Excellent!

happygirl said...

I blushed at the surfing metaphor. :)

Trellissimo said...

Sexy hips!

Helen said...

You infiltrated a recurring dream ... enough already!

Brendan said...

Union, communion -- what's the big dif? Guess there's always something attractive in a man in uniform ... Brendan

Tara R. said...

I had a few comments that probably would have gotten me struck by lightning. I'll stick with... yowza!

Carrie Burtt said...

Steller ending to a wonderful write.....:-)

Fred said...

Wicked fun here MZ. Love the ending. Fun write. Thanks

thingy said...

Oh my. I must read it again. Wickedly wonderful. : )

Caty said...

haha, I busted out laughing. Now, I need to go say a "Hail Mary" :)

myheartslovesongs said...

{{{snort!}}}

Lydia said...

Loveitloveitloveit! Take that, all you pious, pompous psalmsters!

Linda said...

Definitely a surprise ending. Makes you wonder how well you really know someone.

HyperCRYPTICal said...

Oh this is delightfully wicked! Mmmm, that thing Helen said, about dreams....

Anna :o]

zongrik said...

riding the dark wave of your hips,

sounds like fun