MZ, Good for you. Fittings should make it the best fit and looking nice!Hank
oh i LOVE this, you vixen, you!great cinquain. love it.
This made me laugh. I love it.
You do know how to make my evening, MZ! Sylvia
I like this ... it brought a smile to my face. Such a subject ... who would think? A lovely poem evolves! Excellent!
Brilliant last two lines. Congrats!
How utterly amazing is this! Your words took my breath away..........still replaying it all.
I don't know what a cinquain is. Off to google I go. Gees, I hate being dumb.
Ah, beautiful cinquain patter #3. I love the contrast of the mourner and the angel. :)
Very nice cinquain. And sometimes its hard to be still.
Love this...I am not sure I could stand still though...i have a predisposition to fidget...lol
Awesome Cinquain. the veil, weeds of black or Halo- great set of options there- but then you throw the askew line at the very end which makes the smile form on this readers face. Great read, thanks
I like the form and fitting words~Lovely ~
This is very cute!
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