Sunday, September 4, 2011

Your Lips

I study your lips.
Will your hothouse kiss survive
winter's icy tongue?

17 comments:

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Probably not!

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Heaven said...

I like that kind of studying....~

Evelyn said...

promise.

iblogmoore (Amanda Moore) said...

Wow! Sometimes the icy kiss can be a challenge tho LOL!

Sylvia K said...

Ah, one never knows?????

mjshorts said...

A great haiku and a interesting question.

Tara R. said...

You have a magical way with words.

ayala said...

hmm I like that!

Leo said...

Agree with Sylvia.. one can never know :)

Brian Miller said...

well it will certainly be worth the experiment to see...smiles.

Susie Clevenger said...

A question perhaps to be answered in another haiku? love it!

Ed Pilolla said...

i'm not built to survive exotic tongues, though i like to give it a try.
:)

unsungpoet said...

Another very clever, jam-packed and thought-provoking haiku...

Laurie Kolp said...

Mmm... I like this one!

Fireblossom said...

To soothe persistent chill, apply moist heat!

Steve Isaak said...

Superb, perfect.

haikulovesongs said...

{smile}