Friday, September 23, 2011

Water

Some days, the only
thing that keeps me from drowning
is lack of water.

For Haiku Heights

19 comments:

andy sewina said...

Yeah, that's a good statement!

Fireblossom said...

I hid it. Cos I won't letcha drown. ;-)

Morning said...

awesome Haiku.

Fred said...

This Haiku resonates with me so much more than you could no. Extremely strong write. thanks again

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Ah, I know the feeling! :-)



My Watery Haiku

Gemma Wiseman said...

A loaded gun and the trigger's jammed! Excellent!

Sylvia K said...

I love it -- I've had a number of those days recently, so I do relate!!

Sylvia

Richard Cody said...

Yes! Again.

Susie Clevenger said...

I understand this...and some days I feel like I am drowning in what others want of me...

Jinksy said...

Providential! LOL

kaykuala said...

MZ,
Deep in meaning.If only things go our way!

Hank

TechnoBabe said...

That would certainly do it.

Tara R. said...

There's a lot of truth in that.

happygirl said...

Wallowing, drowning, swimming in sorrow. you got it, girl.

Claudia said...

ha - good one...had to think twice! you always surprise with around-the-edge thoughts..

Ed Pilolla said...

had to read this twice, with delight:)

hedgewitch said...

Takes "if it wasn't for bad luck' to a whole new level.

unsungpoet said...

Brilliant! And I can relate.

Lydia said...

I absolutely love this!