I like that sound... lulls me to sleep too~
Very beautiful words.... very similar to what I wrote today....http://uncertainhorizon.blogspot.com/2011/09/beat-still.html
"our darkness"Many layers of meaning in these two juxtaposed words...Hypnotic Meadow
I like your haikus. There, I said it.
sweet and dear.
I have this kind of connection with my husband..... sigh... but it is his snoring that lulls me to sleep! wuahahahahah
I love it! You always say it well! Rest well, have a great tomorrow!Sylvia
You really captured something precious here...
It's like listening to the sea in a shell--hard to tell whose heart is beating sometimes.
i love this!
Reminds me of when my children were babies and fell asleep in my arms nursing.
That's why I like sleeping with my dh.
Nice haiku! I liked it:)
romantic :) zzzzzz...
Really nice. Very beautiful. I love the word choices in particular. Safe/darkness great contrast here, and then hypnotic/lulls. It's a beautiful write if taken as is, but deeper if you look at it as if it's a dangerous world and you have someone that can "shelter" you from the world outside, which is both a good and also a dangerous thing in it's own right. Excellent piece
One of the best...
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