Lace your fingers with mine
and walk with me.
It's just a little rain.
Let's match our footsteps
and nestle in each other's silence.
I have others for the words I say.
But, I have only you
for what I leave unsaid.
Lace your fingers with mine
and walk with me a while.
For Open Link Night at dVerse.
42 comments:
nestle in the silence...delicious. I love this one!
this is BEAUTIFUL - i have only you for what i leave unsaid..nestling in each others silence...ah...simply love it..and who minds the rain anyway..
This is just absolutely gorgeous.
Lovely ~ 'nestle in each others silence...I like that..leaves a nice warm feeling..
So sweet.. I like it~
As to your comment in my blog:
its fleeing, like flying
Thanks ~
very tender write...i love walking in the rain...and someone to share the unsaid things with is a very nice thought...
Filled with feeling. I love it.
"I have only you
for what I leave unsaid." -- Everyone needs 'that' person. Beautiful as always!
A musical, tender love poem.
Someone must feel very special.
(My mommy says I'M special!)
Beautiful poem-- strikingly unusual turn on the meanings of silence-- a kind of hush emanates from the lines that is so spiritually satisfying-- xxxj
No one minds the rain when love in the air. ;-)
Beautifully penned!
Nice and loving, did the darkness get scared away?..haha
This one really spoke to me -- but then most of yours do! Beautiful! And having someone to share the unsaid with is the best!
Sylvia
Very touching Mama
A real piece of delicate
writing...Heart felt
Goes without saying, perhaps, but very nice!
This is such a beautiful, soft and gentle read. It's as love should be.
Lovely~!
The simplest requests often hold the most meaning. A sweet piece!
Nice! simple, perfect
..walking in the rain is one of the nicest thing to do… i like the feel of your words here… a pleasure to read..thanks!
This is beautiful.
Perfect in its simplicity, almost unspoken in its intimacy. Lovely poem!
David
Lace your fingers with mine. I love the delicate connection.
An inviting, peaceful treat!
This is so touching, I adored it from beginning to end. Simply delicate ~ Rose
This is such a gentle piece, almost has a rocking motion to it, like lying a small boat, cocooned by the quiet lapping of the water. Made me take a moment this, thanks.
I keep coming back to your write, everything i wanted to say has been said. So, at risk of boring you ;-)
i really love -
"But, I have only you
for what I leave unsaid."
~ Thank you for sharing. deb
Quaintly smoldering like an old film scene.
Exceedingly romantic ,not a bit smarmy. Perfect, really.
lovely and romantic...as lace and love...bkm
This is a beautiful love poem. Sweet and gentle.
Simply perfect.
simple and bright.
lovely...
Lace fingers, you never see hand holding in public anymore, so sad to see those you know not really knowing how to love sweetly. Good read and warmly felt here too.
wow so romantic, I can hear the rain in the background, can smell the damp in the air....
That's beautiful!
Lace your fingers with me... This is too nice
lovely, the joy of being in quiet
with a loved one.
That's gorgeous, in the sentiments and the expression.
A lovely poem.
I particularly liked the idea of having words for others but not needing them for the one you love.
Love the intimacy in this poem - the laced fingers say so much. Beautiful!
Sigh!
xoxo
I am letting the silence do the talking!!
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