This one made me reminisce my "other" one. Nice.
Mmmm yes, some memories! Enjoy your weekend, MZ!Sylvia
Best feeling ever, to be undone by someone :)
Says it all!
Puts the "others" in their proper place, I'd say! :-)David
I came, I saw, I scolled. Nice poetry. Very clear. Simple. Evocative. Sparse.Love them.
nice lines...so surreal and beautiful!
I love this, and "Walk" from the other day.
Surely there is lovin', and then, dammit, there's Love, erasing all prior history, making only Now count. You nailed it again with those neon Manolos.
"Conveniences, really." That's a harsh self-insight that really shows the poetic eye--its easy to look dispassionately at the flaws of others, but to understand our own,and how they feed or detract from everything else, quite rare. I identify with that line, and all the others. Excellent piece that is totally on target.
nice... i like it ....he must be pretty special ~
I still have that feeling, even after 25 years.
Nice to have that kind of depth of intimacy. Lovely in fact. :)
Without even trying, he's quite a man. Nice read.
A beautifully distilled moment-- I can so relate. Thanks for your wonderful comments on my work....xxxj
Wonderfully worded. Reminds me of how I felt about my late husband. ...no one has undone me with a look the way you do..." brings me to tears. Beautiful, just beautiful.Namaste..........cj
Excellent! Amazing, isn't it, how some people have that potential... Wonderfully crafted!
Mmm, yes. Mine was the bad boy. Just couldn't help myself.Love this. : )
Describing the other who is like no other.
nice to have someone who does that, isn't it?
lucky you! and lucky for the someone who does that to you too!
your poems are beautiful..!!!
So good to be undone... I love it !
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