Oh...dark and yet I like it...I think I threw one of those once :-)
Very clever--dark yet appealing somehow. Thank you too for visiting my blog.
how do you do that?create such atmosphere...
Wow- powerful and the ending took me off guard.
i would be honored if they came to mine...great write MZ
this is a dark one...loved it
That's so sad. Nobody to mourn the dead.
Few things are more depressing than a poorly attended funeral. An appropriately dark take on the prompt.
More depressing than a poorly attended funeral, is a poorly attended life.This was dark and beautifully written.
But look what you've become now that you have come back. Good writing, madam.
Excellent, reflecting the depressing scene in the picture.
Wow, what atmosphere with this one. Add in your own flashing neon header light and I felt like I was somewhere other than here in this room (I am, however, very glad I was not at your real funeral).
Oooh! What a feeling in this! Loved it.
Sad, and heartfelt.— KKay, Alberta, CanadaAn Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Great lead-up, good end-twist.
Sad and beautiful.Anna :o]
Dark and delicious...
excellent take on the prompt! i really like the flow of this. ♥
no mourners. Let's hope he was greeted with eagerness on the other side. Very sad. Loved the last line.
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