Thursday, July 21, 2011

Heat

I want to strip you
with lush and transcendent words
that leave you
lost in languor.

I want to pour you
a river of wine
that pools in the harbor of your hips.

I want to press my breasts
against your chest
until our hearts fall silent.

I want to
seduce you
in the sun.

55 words for my G-Man!

26 comments:

G-Man said...

Whew!!!
That darn heat sure is affecting EVERY aspect of our lives isn't it?
Now I can see why you opened this one up!!!
Loved your Steamy 55 Mama Zen.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Brian Miller said...

the harbor of your hips....nice...deliciously seductive....

Alice Audrey said...

Sounds good to me. Well, with my dh, anyway.

moondustwriter said...

now that would be a sweaty seduction considering how hawt it is!

Nice new blog MZ!!!

Randy Behavior said...

That aught to do the trick!

ladyfi said...

Seductive and oh so lyrical!

haikulovesongs said...

i love the sensual side of your poetry! congratulations on the new blog! i love the look. ♥ dani

Dave King said...

Every fellah's dream - rather better put than even the best of the usual!

Heaven said...

Nice to see you open another blog (like me).

Hot steamy post there ~

Cheryl said...

Excellent imagery, MZ. And damn, it's hot in 55 land today!

happygirl said...

That's a lotta heat. I need a shower. :) Love the 55.

ayala said...

I love it...I just added your new blog to my follow list as well. :)

Ms. Becky said...

I'm delighted you started this poetry blog. your words are delicious. I'll visit long and often. wishing you a joyful weekend Mama Zen.

hedgewitch said...

The middle stanza is genius.And beautiful. A very warm 55. *fans self vigorously*

ab said...

"...harbor of your hips" that's a good spot!

Steve Isaak said...

Excellent, perfect.

yellowhousecafe said...

Excellent 55, MZ & fabulous new blog!!!

Tara R. said...

Definitely gettin' hot in here.

magiceye said...

lustily seductive!

Icy BC said...

This poem is hot than our 101 degree here today!

Lydia said...

Hubba, woman! That is some poem. I think I am going to like 55 a lot. :)

Your blog header is truly remarkable!

Fireblossom said...

In the sun? In the SUN? You can't be serious!

Speaking as a strict Lesbyterian, I love that next to last stanza. Mmmm.

mjshorts said...

A tremendous poem. Well done.

upinthecosmos said...

Wow... it just got hotter up in here & it's already pretty hot from the heat & humidity! Awesome write!

lancemyblogcanbeatupyourblog said...

sultry

languor is a great word.

harbor of hips? damn

Anonymous said...

Every word is hot perfection. You are quite the temptress.

~Shawna